Well, welcome to flash, and uh, good luck.
You'll get better in about a year, hopefully. This.... thing was very VERY stupid and boring. Well, I'm trying to make this an honest, but friendly review, but that wont stop me from giving you an 'F' in animation (but a 'B' if its your first, probably is) and an 'F' in common sense. No one will like this but your dad, but dont get me wrong, he seems like a nice guy if he let you have flash (yea right). Try reading some tuts (tutorials) on flash, animation, tweens, and smoothness first. You'll find them everywhere, worship google, and you will. And well lets hope that works for you.
Try using a forum to post your anims on until you get good enough that you think the Portal is a good place for your anims.